Translation isn’t the best at times—this was a genuinely funny and entertaining read. Pacing was all over the place, but I feel like it lent well to the humor!
It is currently 2 am right now and I literally just finished this manhwa and I mean the whole thing, it's ok for me, the art it cool and funny and some things in the story to but firstly I wanna ask, was this rushed? (Like between the characters) Not to be rude or anything to the Arthur but just a general question, because if you notice they made the ml here fall in love with the mc even though he's not interested yet, go to the more intense explicit parts AND get married? (well getting rings just for now) then all of a sudden they have a side story? hello?? there's still many questions unanswered like I know these can be answered when the side story starts (if possible) but to me it seems all out of order and rushed..(sorry if i come off rude)
Secondly some things that bothers me in the story? well for one the practically illegal "jokes", I'm ticked because this is actually horrifying because every time in a scene for example in the manhwa when the ml is forcing the mc to do something they make it look good in a way when it's not, (and yes i didn't forget how the mc h*rrased the ml and the blonde guy at the casino this counts too..) this isn't "dark humor" its straight up illegal, and the stuff the other blonde guy gave to the ml + mc (the one who calls the mc "bunny") is disgusting too its a straight up d*ug he's giving them, i feel bad for that one body guard it LITERALLY made him go crazy and fool with a doctor. And the brother + family of the mc? I don't know how he calls them family they only want him when it's for something to gain but other then that if the brother of this guy is not satisfied he'll hit him or will nag him when he's busy or whatever and the MC will just take it?? I mean I know different countries different laws, rules but really?? Hitting the youngest or one of the youngest for me will never happen no matter how mad I am for them being attracted to the same gender (well I won't and will never because I don't care and secondly I'm bi myself.) There's a lot more stuff if you pay attention to the plot very closely but I'm to lazy to say anymore but just know to keep an eye out because there's a lot of toxic things here (and yes i expected this since its a bit toxic..)
and lastly for whoever translated those 54 + the 1-2 chapters I beg of you PLEASE read it closely cause some parts were off the whole time i was reading this, so please fix it!
thank you I'll take my leave now (P.S this is just my view, thoughts and opinions not saying I hate it or whatever or telling anyone to view it the same just putting it out there, and I mean hey the reviews are here for a reason right?)
The Seme just ignores the uke as a person. Doesn't call him by its name. The uke just accepts everything and gives himself as guilty for everything. Waited this chap 25 same thing as always. Never had a deep talk or even respected each other. No thank you
