Simple story to just past time. No indept character Most characters are dumb (dumb moves, dumb plans etc) No deep reasons for everything Characters changed too easily like : Annette loves Ridley for sooo loongg she even got jealous over Vendal and suddenly she married to someone she met just few chapters. Not too mention her husband is used to be a criminal but surprisingly good person (???) No story about it. Estefan (?) Forgot his name, was like a victim of manipulation of Queen Victoria, which made him obsessed over Vandel and he died just like that. Yes, he was wrong by killing his father and framing his sister, but the least he could get is Vandel forgiving him because it was Queen Victoria Plan to made Vandel hates human, by threatening estefan. Percival was like infatuated with Annette and then bam, yeah I chose to be a traitor and challenge Ridley even if Ridley is proven to be so strong. Oops I died. Queen Victoria was somehow very strong and powerful throughout the story, but her initial plan was kinda dumb, like, kidnapping Annette? Really? She was very strong even Vandel couldn't stand up against her but in her last moment, suddenly, her specialty is just illusion (super useless magic). At least she died protecting Vandel, I mean she was so wrong with her mind games and evil deeds by manipulating Estefan & Percival and led them to die. So yeah she deserves to die. Vandel, he was described as prince of darkness, hero of the demon bla bla bla. But he passed out after 1 hit from human girl?? Even got himself kidnapped. His magic is also draining so fast it's almost useless in battle. Like he only able to cast 1-2 full spell. Ridley is most annoying character with his goody two shoes attitude where he firmly believe his father is a saint. Like yikes. Bone King, after all the terrors, he died with just one snap(?) Bruuhhh.
What's more, Queen Victoria claimed her plan to merge demon & human kingdom is to attain power that strong enough to kill bone king. Then why go so long with elaborate plan only to kill estefan (?). The ancient appearance didn't give impact or significant in a story. In fact. We can just scrap it all and the story will still continues. The ancient told Ridley & Vandel, the appearance and size of bone monster is connected with how far the bone king is. Many times, bone monster in very big size appeared and Ridley & Vandel didn't even suspected anything. Like, you know, asked (?) Oh the monster is big, it's mean the bone king is near, we have to search for him. No. They never even think that far it's so annoying. Even the ancient told them, crystalbreaker has bone king trace, but they both didn't even question why there's a trace of bone king in human sword. Like. They forgot it all. That's why I said, ancient arc should just be scrapped. Both of them didn't even pay attention to the information given by the ancient.
3 knights were actually ran away when they saw vandel, but upon returning to the kingdom, strangely enough they still stationed in inner palace even as far as to guard the king chamber. Like wtf is wrong with these kingdom.
Just read for the sake of fun. The plot and characters really dumb but the art is good
Enemies to lovers trope never gets old. Ridley falling hard at first sight for Vandel is so fcking cute. Vandel is such a chaotic pookie I love his continuous teasing ang flirting lol. I love the development of their relationship and also of their own characters. Vandel grew from being so blind to his duty to actually opening his heart and mind to the real story behind his life purpose. Vandel also grew to follow his own path that he chose instead of being a pawn to his mother. Though there were many plot holes in the story, the ending was perfect. I love this story. Also, they got to be together for an infinite time in the end.
Such a beautiful story! I highly recommend it and be prepared there might be some scenes that would make you cry. I hardly find nice BL stories like this nowadays, if anyone knows one like this please let me know
No indept character
Most characters are dumb (dumb moves, dumb plans etc)
No deep reasons for everything
Characters changed too easily like :
Annette loves Ridley for sooo loongg she even got jealous over Vendal and suddenly she married to someone she met just few chapters. Not too mention her husband is used to be a criminal but surprisingly good person (???) No story about it.
Estefan (?) Forgot his name, was like a victim of manipulation of Queen Victoria, which made him obsessed over Vandel and he died just like that. Yes, he was wrong by killing his father and framing his sister, but the least he could get is Vandel forgiving him because it was Queen Victoria Plan to made Vandel hates human, by threatening estefan.
Percival was like infatuated with Annette and then bam, yeah I chose to be a traitor and challenge Ridley even if Ridley is proven to be so strong. Oops I died.
Queen Victoria was somehow very strong and powerful throughout the story, but her initial plan was kinda dumb, like, kidnapping Annette? Really? She was very strong even Vandel couldn't stand up against her but in her last moment, suddenly, her specialty is just illusion (super useless magic). At least she died protecting Vandel, I mean she was so wrong with her mind games and evil deeds by manipulating Estefan & Percival and led them to die. So yeah she deserves to die.
Vandel, he was described as prince of darkness, hero of the demon bla bla bla. But he passed out after 1 hit from human girl?? Even got himself kidnapped. His magic is also draining so fast it's almost useless in battle. Like he only able to cast 1-2 full spell.
Ridley is most annoying character with his goody two shoes attitude where he firmly believe his father is a saint. Like yikes.
Bone King, after all the terrors, he died with just one snap(?) Bruuhhh.
What's more, Queen Victoria claimed her plan to merge demon & human kingdom is to attain power that strong enough to kill bone king. Then why go so long with elaborate plan only to kill estefan (?).
The ancient appearance didn't give impact or significant in a story. In fact. We can just scrap it all and the story will still continues. The ancient told Ridley & Vandel, the appearance and size of bone monster is connected with how far the bone king is. Many times, bone monster in very big size appeared and Ridley & Vandel didn't even suspected anything. Like, you know, asked (?) Oh the monster is big, it's mean the bone king is near, we have to search for him. No. They never even think that far it's so annoying. Even the ancient told them, crystalbreaker has bone king trace, but they both didn't even question why there's a trace of bone king in human sword. Like. They forgot it all. That's why I said, ancient arc should just be scrapped. Both of them didn't even pay attention to the information given by the ancient.
3 knights were actually ran away when they saw vandel, but upon returning to the kingdom, strangely enough they still stationed in inner palace even as far as to guard the king chamber. Like wtf is wrong with these kingdom.
Just read for the sake of fun. The plot and characters really dumb but the art is good