Comments of Kono Toshishitakun, Yudan Narana Itsu!

Nothing to write home about, but it was an okay story

Bruh the fuck is this?!?!? Mc just goes along with whatever the fuck the ml wants and in the end SHE has to be the one who approaches him and say she loves him. THE AUDACITY the ml has after he practically almost got her fired. Yucky.

it rly ended like that? kekw
its just an average smut story, nothing else to it. Not a satisfying ending but it wasnt bad overall ig.

Chap 5 finished reading

Chap 5 finished reading

NAH BC I CRIED FOR NO REASON

One » I was wondering if not in police in this world. Because if a guy breaks into my house and says he's going to live there. It's pretty simple to call the police or pull a knife.
(If he doesn't get arrested, he gets out dead)
Two » Why the hell didn't she do anything on the train? She needed the help of the guy who kidnapped her house.
Three » she submits to being humiliated in the workplace. What a hate. (At least in the end she resigned)
Four » this issue of Hayato being rich, she is poor. They can't be together blah blah... cliché.
Conclusion » a story without innovation. Not that it's bad, but it's not great either. For a short story it was satisfying.