Comments of Ookamitachi No Gohoubi

Lazy writing, maybe it's just the author that was terrible or the translation made it worse, but it was so bad I found myself more and more angry with each page I read.

I enjoyed this quite a bit.

The story could have been better. I feel that it lacks depth and it's somewhat empty. I don't feel my heart thumping, or aching. I can't fully sympathize with the characters. It's too fast paced, as if everything's in a rush and is squeezed together in those 4 chapters. It would have been better if the story and the circumstances are explained briefly and thoroughly without the feeling of rush. And the development of feelings between the characters are too surreal and the development of their relationships is too quick and easy to attain especially since they haven't even known each other for a month at that.

Cute. Could have been developed further for better results.