Comments of The Part-time Housekeeper!

the art is cute, but why is this so short i didnt even get to see what happens with boseok... but its ok he has me instead

Ugh the bottom is so weak like boy wtf and poor boseok

I didn't want them to end up together I forgot the reason but I only like angst and being fair

Very meh. Wish he wound up with his friend instead. Seme was a jackass.

I speed ran through this. Bestfriend didn't get the closure he needed. Too fast and shallow? Is that right. It has a plot that I would forget and wouldn't matter even if i forget



Hahahhaah i forgot the plot.
I think mc is a cleaner, blonde is an asshole, confess? End

i finally read it

Huh. That was very short but cute ig ??

HE WAS THERE BEFORE THIS BITCH, WHY DIDN'T HE TELL HIM NOOOOOOOOOOO

Ehh, what happened to the friend?

Art is pretty good but they’re so awkward lmao

Idk why the ratings are so low, this wasn't bad. I mean, there were flaws here and there but it wasn't bad

it's so bad that i want to bawl my eyes out

Not bad but the pacing is really weird and the plot is a little random, feel indecisive haha could have been really good if it was paced better lol

I gave the story 3 stars but keep in mind this is more like a 2.5 star story. I just rounded it up.

If I fucked a dude and he immediately kicked me out with that fuck ass attitude Jeon Yuncheon had, I'd have never fallen in love with him. Paying "for the sex" as if I'm a whore and then kicking me out, making me walk an hour away back home . . . That's crazy. Han Jaemin don't love himself.

This was a very simple, straightforward story. A guy has a one-night stand with a man who has a terrible attitude and then finds out his new boss is that same man. It's funny, it's cute, it's relatively inoffensive. I didn't really like Yuncheon's attitude, it wasn't too endearing to me, and I thought the switch from him acting rude to him being all cute and flustered was kind of random and unearned.

However with the light-hearted tone this story has, those complaints aren't really heavy. They aren't huge blows to the story. This is a short comedy, so his attitude isn't treated all that seriously nor is what he actually does all that bad. He's just a bit stuck-up, a bit careless. You're not meant to think he's terrible you're just meant to laugh at how these two act around each other. And while I never really properly liked him as a person, as a character he was kinda funny and bounced off Jaemin well.

I liked the dynamic between these two. It was funny, and at times even cute. They had a few cute moments between them, a few funny moments; I liked the running gag of Jeon Yuncheon having him cook all types of food only to not want it. It exasperated him and that was pretty comedic. I never really laughed but it got a little smile out of me, which is better than nothing.

The story has two kind of big issues for me, though; one being the open and unnecessary plot-line about Han Jaemin's friend liking him. He was going to confess, got interrupted, and then that moment never really got any resolution. It kind of just leaves me asking why? Why even include it?

The second issue is what I said earlier, I just don't really think Yuncheon liking Jaemin was developed well. It came out of nowhere, it felt very rushed. What exactly does he like about him? His ass? Because that's what I felt like it was, and that's obviously pretty dissatisfying for a relationship.