People who read How to make tasty milk

Rookie

why choose when you can have neither

Angela

that was a lot to unpack but the obvious choice was karrion

Kristykristy

Silly hot smut

Vette

Bad translations

chlorine

Dude, this story was so fucking shit, literally just do not read this ever. If you're drawn in by the fat tits, trust me there is better—anything is better. Open up MRM and literally everything under the 'huge breasts' tag blows this out of the water. There's genuinely nothing redeeming to this for me.

The art—the fat tits especially—was a big draw, and that was almost enough for me to say that this story had at least one redeeming quality. But the art seemed to be really inconsistent, and the proportions were just some of the worst I've ever seen. The tits were huge, which I loved, and so the rest of Oroks body was huge too to be proportionate to that, even with the exaggeration of the breasts . . . Except for his head, which at times looked distractingly small. It was just bad. This was bad art.

Another thing that was just straight-up bad, which also impacted the overall story, was the translation. It was very evident that the translator either wasn't fluent in English, or they were using a machine translation and just didn't bother to clean it up; I'm going to assume it's the former, because for whatever reason that's just really common. People that can't speak English for some reason love translating shit to English . . . Don't do that. You ruin the story. Stick to your own language. If you can't differentiate between 'you're' and 'your,' what business do you have translating shit to English. Bitch you can't even speak English.

The biggest issue for me though is that the story just . . . Wasn't good. It just wasn't. I can't tell how much of that can be attributed to the poor translation, but even with that, the basic story is just poor. The structure and flow of it was terrible. There are only thirteen chapters, and it's a love triangle . . . Except the second love interest isn't introduced until, like, five chapters in, and it's mainly just porn, so the sudden inclusion of legitimate feelings from the two love interests just felt very . . . Well, sudden. It wasn't well built. There was no foundation there. All they did was fuck, we didn't actually see any of these three men fall in love, so Karrian and Cornnell trying to make him choose between them at the end just felt stupid and unearned rather than engaging and intense. Why would he pick either of y'all when you're just glorified dildos?

noa

(In plotless smut list.)

ms.marsnmiahzz

Needless to say, I had only clicked for the titties... and I'm glad I did cuz I was eating this shirt upppp like

SpoonFlakes

Chap 13 (Mar 2024)

Happybirthday

13

Monica

i don't know why but i love it. it's just that if i'm gonna choose between the two it's neither. those two are scumbags. i love oraks but why are you so dumb? and i don't know why some people like the uke to have some big tits like a girl in josei.

Fubuki

c10 FLCH, R_DEEP

Itzz_A_Trap

I cant take this shit seriously

FujoshiDrip

lmao it when downhill at the middle.

Martyorly11

Ch 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 10, 12, 13
ch 13

Nene

Lmao

Booklover

Chapter 13

Ana

its ONGOING, why is it marked completed at ch 13???

Greyishin

What

GM IJIN

Bad translation + story is all over the place

Re-l mayer

Smut