beta
**Ch.23”i- its the story progressing super fast with little to no actual romantic progress then creating conflict out of nowhere because of one asshole character for me”-comments. I couldn’t have said it better myself. It’s such a shame too becuz the character are cute
**Ch.20 I really hate the mother I also find the love child distasteful like come on.I really hope they will finish from his arc. On another note I really hate that the cousins are back together I mean yukihito deserves better. On the bright side I really love the main couple too bad I hate almost every one else.ill give it a 3 for now cuz I can’t stand the hole love child biz like please go abroad.
**Complete good ending for the story but I personally want romance and would have liked to see him end up w/the brother (ovi only if he got help/ character development)or doctor (not the ugly friend gross). And not gonna lie kinda gross at times w/all the daddy issues and that teacher guy ....This story does a good job of making you feel like a pervert.
**Ch.6 the cover is a scam the art was mediocre and the character(uke) barely looks like him. The story had weird pacing and some unanswered questions. Meh
Knock on Wood