beta
- this was okay for two chapters
- uke WANTING to get bought by someone is kinda refreshing idk is that crazy. - - despite the seme buying the uke from a fucking black market auction (he was a worker though so he wasnt actually getting sold) this was actually kinda wholesome.
- the other couple was cute too i guess
- i feel like this had potential at the beginning but for ME PERSONALLY i dont really like how the story developed.
- overall though it wasn't bad, fun little read i guess nothing too crazy
- um seme is a little weird in this one
- uke is also kinda weird for lowkey liking it idk
- it was ehh
- this was good
- i loved both of the characters and how the story developed
- loved the smut
- lowkey this was actually really good
on my "messed up stuff i've read list"
on my "messed up stuff i've read" list
- this was good (?)
- the relationship was maybe a little rushed for me
- first chapter was really good though, i loved the tension
- would've been great but i loathe when a character tries to do something to another character while they're sleeping
- apart from that though i enjoyed the dynamic(?) idk if that's the explanation i'm looking for but whatever.
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