Wow the writing is superb, it tackled problems that some ppl suffer with I also loved the setting for this story it felt refreshing Especially love how the top didnt just give up, the fact that he wasnt selfish even though he had desires to do it with his lover. It was rlly considerate of him, normally some ppl wouldve just given up saying "we're not compatible"
The fact that he willingly tried to find his erogenous zone to make it work for the both of them, so that both of them equally can feel good and get intimate. Pacing was good, the characters and the way they acted, so real.
The only thing was kinda iffy for me was in the last chapter, why'd he have to leave after things were getting good And then proceed not to respond to him like?? I get him having the fear of things getting so good that Eric would get sick of him but bro couldve just communicated that with him damn.
But anyways, in the end they did get to clear things up so its all good i guess?
Wouldve loved an extra chapter tho, I rlly enjoyed reading it
Special shoutout to the dk redrawer, was really impressed, when redrawing is done right, this is what u get
Wow the writing is superb, it tackled problems that some ppl suffer with
I also loved the setting for this story it felt refreshing
Especially love how the top didnt just give up, the fact that he wasnt selfish even though he had desires to do it with his lover.
It was rlly considerate of him, normally some ppl wouldve just given up saying "we're not compatible"
The fact that he willingly tried to find his erogenous zone to make it work for the both of them, so that both of them equally can feel good and get intimate. Pacing was good, the characters and the way they acted, so real.
The only thing was kinda iffy for me was in the last chapter, why'd he have to leave after things were getting good
And then proceed not to respond to him like??
I get him having the fear of things getting so good that Eric would get sick of him but bro couldve just communicated that with him damn.
But anyways, in the end they did get to clear things up so its all good i guess?
Wouldve loved an extra chapter tho, I rlly enjoyed reading it
Special shoutout to the dk redrawer, was really impressed, when redrawing is done right, this is what u get