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The last chapter feels like there are gaps -- as it reads, it's a bit cold and aloof, but ...

Deefer May 31, 2014 7:22 pm

The last chapter feels like there are gaps -- as it reads, it's a bit cold and aloof, but the rest of the artist's story was "touchable" - almost real, you know? So I think the last chapter was something the artist was told to hurry up and finish, and it suffered because of that. Otherwise, this was a cute story!!!

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