DuckityDuck's Things

Have you guys heard? And if you have, I'd like to know what you guys think
Personally, y'know, imo
JJK fans were a bit childish to start this debate in the first place since no fandom had any issues with ORV until JJK (and most didn't even bother researching or looking into ORV or its story so all of their insults are mostly biased + didn't even know what ORV was which is tragic; they're missing out.)
But that's just me (I'm in both fandoms but I still think ORV suits skyfall more)
So? Just for fun, which suits skyfall more? ORV or JJK?

I was just reading and mggo suddenly went down
I was so scared it might never come back again cuz it said "Could not find host"
I was being so genuinely serious when I say I was planning to mourn for this site as if it were a person

So this is actually for a roleplay but I want tips on how I can improve this further so I can use it as reference
My writer side went out and I made my friend wait like 40-ish minutes for a whole paragraph
I didn't realize it got this long
The prompt was that MC got into a contract relationship with a mafia boss and they had to live in a mansion where the servants disliked them too
Also the mafia boss has a lover :P
And so the MC, tired of this treatment, ran away from the mansion and like idk 2 or a few years later, they met again at a jewelery store
(My friend turned the mafia boss into a sobbing, stuttering mess lol)
I just wanted to break out of the trope where the MC gets back with their ex (even though they were mistreated) and I wanted to convey her anger and stuff
What I'm imagining is that she never loved him or anything but she genuinely cared for him and tried atually helping y'know
Until she got tired of it and ran away etc.
I got too absorbed in it

Anyway, please give me some tips
I'm like, considering making an original story with original characters and all that but I wanna improve my writing first so I wouldn't have to make that many drafts (T ^ T)
(Note: I'm not thinking of being a professional author or anything like that, I just wanna write as a hobby :3)
Since its too long, I'll put the ss in the comments.
Please tell me where to improve, if its too wordy, if there's better words I can use on certain parts, if I can improve the flow, etc etc.
I'm sorry if I'm asking for too much, you don't have to offer advice if you don't want to.

Have a lovely day :>

Was just roleplaying with my friend but then the writer in me suddenly came out and wrote a whole paragraph
It was completely unintentional and I was shocked by how long it was lol
But since I've made it this far, do you think I can improve this farther? I'll use it as reference for later works (I write as a hobby but I'm currently trying to write a story for my own viewing :3)

Here it is:
She stayed silent. Only ever looking at him coldly— eyes, devoid of any previous hope or love she had for the man. Now, he was but a stranger; a stranger whom she used to care for.

The only thing she feels for him now is frustration, pain, and anger: frustration at the fact the man had the complete and utter audacity to come crawling back to her, looking as if he were an abandoned dog, left to die on the streets—

I need an acc to fall back on when I miss some new series
I've been real inactive lately (;゜゜)
For those who don't know, otome isekai is rofan aka romance fantasy!!!
I also like action fantasy ( ´∀｀ )b