beta
The story actually started off good, but half through, it feels bland. They skipped over the important parts, creating choppy storyline, completely stopping readers to form any kind of emotional connection with the characters. They have no depth whatsoever.
Are they going to fuck for the entire season? It's getting boring, I need plot and conflict or better yet just them being cute boyfriends, doing cute boyfriends things, having silly fights and resolve their silly fights in the most adorable way.