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I have mixed feelings about this. At first it was really ok but when naruse's past friend came in picture, I understand when he came to like Machida. But to the point that he keeps on making moves on Machida even though he already has a boyfriend? To the point that he kissed her because he's unable to stop himself??? Girl what the fuck? I'm also seriously disappointed with the FL which is Machida because isn't she supposed to have some kind of reflex? I mean putangina girl?? You're just gonna let someone kiss you? I mean kung hindi ka man maka react ng in time kasi nabigla ka wala man lang bang sampal??? I also don't like how the author did the FL like every boy he meets makes passes on her??? Every time they make a move on her she wouldn't push them away and the next day she would act very nervous infront of them. Amputa parang ginawa mo ng pick me girl yung FL author ah, tsaka eto pa they don't talk about yung pinagawayan nila especially whenever some guy keeps on making passes on her. But whenever it's about Naruse, every time a girl would make a pass on him they would actually make a story of how Machida feels towards that. Putanginang yan. I can't even believe the FL JUST LETS SHIZUKA MAKE A MOVE ON HER. TANGINA SA TAGAL NG CONFESS SI SHIZUKA NEVER MAN LANG TALAGANG ITRY IREJECT. Talagang pinipilit ng author na gawing second ml lol, I have to say half of the story is bullshit. Talagang nung patapos na yung manga saka nya lng talaga trinay iend. And about Shizuka can't the author js give him his own love plot or whatever you call it kasi pinipilit lang na maging ml siya. Walang character development Kay Machida lol, the author js focused on making alot of guys interested in Machida. Yeah this is abit bullshit.
I put a trigger warning just in case someone might get pissed off with my opinion.
First off I wanna talk about Karina's family
They are all FUCKING BULLSHIT especially the green head guy. He was FUCKING annoying that he only thinks about Lia Lia Lia Lia Lia I mean common men you could've js told it earlier to the Karina's father. Idk but that green head dude makes it feel like he's into Lia.
Second thing is this is why we should talk about family planning, this mfs js keep on adding babies and they be neglecting their first born?? Mf even if those younger children of urs are sick doesn't mean you have to be a asshole parents. Leaving Karina all behind, pushing back her birthday always because one of her sibling got sick, can't u guys js one of the parents be with her like? Y'all js thinking of yourself even saying that she isn't grateful. GIRL if I was her I would've ran away long time ago, I ain't dealing with all that neglecting shit.
Third is (please don't hate me for this but) I think the story is very dragging, at some point yeah the story ok but as I read it becomes very boring for me ok.
Fourth is I don't like how the author is making these people who surround Karina forcing her to say something she still doesn't want to. I mean I totally get it if they want to know but common. And also I totally want a character development for the ML and FL. Ik misunderstanding stories are a thing in romance because it's where it picks up it's own climax but sometimes the misunderstanding comes to the fucking point where it's annoying.