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I’m sorry but this story is 95% flashbacks, like we get it. Please continue with the present, I’m tired of the present getting good then boom childhood trauma.
Me toooo there’s so many flashbacks!
Honestly, when it’s so many flashbacks I start to lose track of what the current plot is. It’s like they’re throwing in so many subplots and then they’re just like “..yeah that’s it, we will not delve deeper. Take this “lesbian” kiss.” So it feels nonsensical and not well thought out. I understand they’re trying to make it angsty but it’s not coming out the way intended.
Sometimes his idiocy is endearing but sometimes it’s too much and I facepalm violently.