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This story fails to create a genuine emotional connection between the mc and the audience, and then expects us to go omg her life is so hard and tragic!! I’m sooo sad for her uwu. If you enjoyed this story, Good on you! I also enjoyed it enough to read it all then write a long ass criticism of it. Thank you in advance to anyone who reads this, and I really want anyone who disagrees to let me know why.


we know nothing substantial about mc that makes her likable as a character. she’s “hard working” and “smart” until when she tries to elope TWICE she has no plan whatsoever despite having access to so much money and education thanks to her background. Despite studying so hard, she ends up being trailed and attacked or captured and turned into a slave cos she took 1/NO guards!!! Wtf?? she’s apparently “kind” for letting her younger sister and fiancé walk all over her and also for remembering the name of a maid…??? How low is the bar??

Sure it’s sad that no one loves her, but why am i expected to care? The forms of “punishment” enacted on her are so damn tropey it’s actually comical. Everybody hates her for NO reason while adoring her younger sister, She’s forced to watch her fiancé fall in love with her weak younger sister, and she ends up suffering over and over again. Not to mention the last minute rape added in to add shock factor. Why would i care about this essentially piece of white bread being shitted on. Nothing about her suffering makes sense, so why should I care? You know what I would care about? An interesting, developed character having to deal with extremely personal and real issues. I’d feel bad if everyone hated her if, for example, she struggled with social cues. I’d feel bad for her having to study so much if i was shown that she actually had a life which was taken away from her, or if it was emphasised how her sister is able to do things she can’t. I’d feel bad for her fiancé cheating on her if there was an actual relationship between them

And lastly, “do you think you’re the only one miserable?” I cannot explain how much i hate this. The idea of her repeatedly suffering as some sort of punishment for her sins is actually a really, really interesting idea but then it’s trampled on by this lazy, last minute line. Is this the authors way of trying to make this story seem deep and invigorating? It’s just a cheap way of making us the audience feel bad because all of the shit that’s happened to her is invalidated by this character (Crow) who she seems to find solace in, and also to try and add some mystery. But guess what, i don’t care if the other characters are suffering! Why would we, when we are literally pitted to hate them.

there’s so much other stuff i could write about but in the end ive been typing and editing for half an hour now. This story touches on interesting albeit overused themes which i really enjoy, yet it utilises them badly which overall highlights the lack of love and care put into it

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hiii could i get some spoilers on the ending please?

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YARGGH MATEYS! IF YE BE REQUIRING THE AID OF A PIRATE I BE HERE TO HELP YE. REQUEST OF ME ANY METHOD OF PIRACY AND I SHALL HELP YE. ARRGH

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A NEET fujoshi is forced by her younger sister to adopt a pet salaryman....

  • Author: Mikawa Eko
  • Genres: Comedy / Seinen / Slice Of Life
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Bingsoo Cat Café, please know we understand why you take so much time. The translations you provide are of such a high quality, they can’t compare to the shitty bot translations. The sniper is not even brave enough to publicly post the chapters because they’re cowards

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is it impossible to find historical shoujo manwha with no romance and instead a focus on found family?

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it’s hard reading manwha sometimes due to all the rampant misogyny, colourism and other shit. I can’t read stuff without being reminded how horrible it is to have dark skin, how you are less than human if you’re fat, and how women are treated like objects constantly. No matter what genre I go to, woman aren’t allowed to exist without someone breathing down their throat for not being conventionally attractive

Any spoilers on who the killer is? The one that killed the dukes mother and left the flowers

fatass created a topic of May Your Misery Exceed Mine

i was hoping this would be regression into the past but i guess not

how is that big ass bracelet not falling off her wrist??? i understand korean manwha artists are under a serious time crunch but they could’ve atleast scaled down the bracelet..

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hello, can i get some recs where the mc is vengeful and petty pls? but not op, i wanna see them struggle quite a bit :3

fatass created a topic of For You Who Grieves

i always enjoy these types of stories because i’m a sucker for the trope where mc has to hide their identity from ml, but it always makes me sad that the mc usually goes into a younger, cuter, smaller body? idk if anyone understand what I mean, but there’s another popular story with this body swap type of plot where the beefy mc also gets put into the body of a twink

fatass created a topic of Half of Me

help… binge read this all in one night..i can feel my heart race increasing to the point im gonna die from how good it was

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BINGSOO CAT CAFE PLEASE PLEASE DONT ABANDON US WE LOVE YOU PLEASE

this is seriously such a good manwha i cannot get enough of it

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WHAT DID THEY DO TO YOU SUN WUKONG!!! THEY YAOIFIED YOU!!!!!

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A Shimizu-oriented live-in manga depicting a male streamer and an office worker who falls in love wi...

  • Author: Sawaco
  • Genres: Yaoi / Comedy / Shounen Ai

it’s interesting seeing how intertwined eating disorders are in japanese culture. Actually, all asian culture in general.