AprilStar's manga / #cute(4)

I LOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEE THIS. It's prob my new fav BL. The seme is perfect, he's cute, he blushes, he's expressive and sensitive, although he often tries to hide it. Tbh the uke is not as cute but I like his personality and how he's not stereotypical. Also, the smut is CREATIVE and not lazy AT ALL, it's so rare to see this. In most BLs, the smut scenes are all the same and get boring as time goes on, but this BL does it differently. IT DOES IT RIGHT!! Oh, and uncensored dicks, ofc, and nice angles. I love that I can see everything. And the romance, ofc, the romance, it's great!!!! The supernatural touch to it is amazing!!! LOVE IT 1000000/10

Cool, I love this kind of romance, but the "smut" is too vanilla and doesn't fit the theme. Plus, I would like to see more physical reactions from the seme, and how the hot scenes end (does he get hard? Does he fap? Wth happens)

Positives: I love the dynamic, I love the characters, it deals with interesting topics, it introduces guideverse quite well, it has nice smut (could be better but eh). Negatives: feels unfinished. I feel like they didn't settle their relationship appropriately at the end. Plus, Lee Jaeha goes on and on about the same stuff for wayyy to many chapters, and that is just unnecessary. Instead of dragging the same drama through multiple chapters, there could have been other stuff like dungeons, missions, more exploration on Jiyoon's trauma (and character in general), them simply going to different places, and obviously, they could have imprinted. Also, this is just a personal preference, but they could kiss more and have more sexy scenes that aren't just smut. More sexual tension. Instead, they only have sex (which is also good but no fun).

Cute, it was VERY good, like 5/5 stars until... they confessed. Then it honestly became just lazy writing. And the smut? I mean, it's non-existent. If the author didn't want to write the "smut", then they could have just not added any kind of spicy scene at all. I guess it ended at the confession, actually, and the rest was kind of a side story, but still. It ended suddenly. To me, the confession felt like the beginning of the story, not the end. That's also lazy imo. I still like it but I'm disappointed with the ending.