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So....how many times is Lina gonna cause a spectacle and or fuck up for someone to sit her ass down somewhere? Now she has this dark power that can make people do what she wants. I feel like Seria can exorcise that darkness from people bc she did it before, right?? I hope the story starts picking up. I really, really like it and I love when Lina gets put in her place and when everything goes wrong for her, but I need her to be defeated like...YESTERDAY. And I dont mean Seria exorcises her from the darkness and she's all good and everyone forgives her. No, I mean I want her put in a guillotine and.....well, wait is that too much? Anyway, I want her gone. And that child is the child of the devil.
I cannot stress enough how much I love and enjoy this story. Hold on for a sec....THATS KEI'S MAMA??? I thought she was a student!....Anyway, back to what I was saying. I think I've said it before but the touching in this reminds me if The Nerd Project. The touching and kissing is so unbelievably hot in that and personally, I haven't found a story who comes close to how sensual their love language is...until I read this story.
Even when Kei takes MCs face in his hands so that he can see MCs mouth, it's so innocent, yet sensual and beautiful to me. I feel like touching might be their love language too. At least it might be Kei's. And he doesn't even know it yet. Lol
This will probably be like a 15 chapter long story or something like that. :-( I truly wish it was a full length story with 50 or so chapters and some side stories. It doesnt even have to be colored. I just want it longer bc when it ends soon, I know I'm gonna be incredibly sad. Sorry if I'm dramatic. LOL:-))